Writing

Term 1 and 2:

So far through out these two terms we have written narratives and letters. For editing we have uded the "Plan Man" and Miss S's editing cards. My writting goals are to be able to make my sentences and paragraphs more interesting and intriguing to get the reader more excited about the story. I think I am pretty good at my grammar and spelling but every now and then I will make a mistake.

On one of our Wednesday writing sessions in term 1 Mr. Graham read us a story from Just Annoying by Andy Griffths called "In the shower with Andy". When he finishd reading the story he sent us away to write our own short story like one of Andy Griffths. Here is my story:

New Anzac day we got into things about the war. We watched the movie Gollipoli and drew a picture about the movie. Then we had to write a letter as if we were someone from war. We had a choice of being either a soilder or a nurse at war. I decided to bea soilder named Fred. Here is my letter:

During Another writin session we had to write a formal letter to a company. I was here when we started the planning. I was going to write a letter to the Bendigo R.S.P.C.A to tell them what a good job they had done to keep all the pens clean, but the day we had to write the letter to them I was away.

In term 1 we had to write a Portal Story abouta portal. We also had to wite one this term (term 1). It was srt of a test to see how much better our planing, spelling, editing and story writting had gotten. I think I wote an o.k story. We had to write a plan on paper then type a story up on the computer and print it out. Next we had to edit any mistakes and and or remove any words. Then we had to fix up the mistakes on the computer and print again. Then we had to staple them together. Here is my good version: